The follow-through in his legs when the sword hits his shoulder is very nice (good use of the comments from the previous post). The sword still feels really "light" when it is at 9 to 11:30 on the movement "clock." Almost like it becomes weightless for those frames. Great progress! Looking forward to your revisions!
nice camera shake. I agree the sword feels too light when he's picking it up. Also to me it feels like his body position is pulling the sword instead of picking it up. Maybe have him stand up a little straighter when trying to pick up the sword.
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The follow-through in his legs when the sword hits his shoulder is very nice (good use of the comments from the previous post). The sword still feels really "light" when it is at 9 to 11:30 on the movement "clock." Almost like it becomes weightless for those frames. Great progress! Looking forward to your revisions!
nice camera shake. I agree the sword feels too light when he's picking it up. Also to me it feels like his body position is pulling the sword instead of picking it up. Maybe have him stand up a little straighter when trying to pick up the sword.
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